利用者‐会話:AJO-200a

Re: Fausto Cercignani[編集]

Your translation to Japanese is simply too mechanical. It would be the subject of deletion if posted to article namespace. If I translate, it would be like Special:Permalink/70266477. I added {{一次資料}} as your article relies so heavily on Cercignani's CV and works by himself that Jawp contributers may see it with the primary-source ploblem. I recommend you to find more third-party sources. Also, the long list of barely relevant writers' names should be cut off. --Deer hunter（会話） 2018年10月13日 (土) 15:17 (UTC)[返信]

Many thanks for your translation and advice! I found third-party sources for footnote 1ab. Should I replace it at Special:Permalink/70266477 or should I send you the sources? The long list of writers may of course be deleted. When the article is OK, I think you may consider it as yours and post it to article namespace. --AJO-200a（会話） 2018年10月14日 (日) 08:06 (UTC)[返信]

You can show me the new sources here or at my talk page. Feel free to edit Special:Permalink/70266903 if you'd like to. I have brought back footnotes [6]-[24] to the article. I'm not sure whether those links to bibliographic information and the papers themselves are proper "sources" for presenting one's portfolio, though. But they wouldn't hurt there.

I'll wait for a few days to see if other people have an opinion about the Japanese spelling. I'll post the article Afterward. --Deer hunter（会話） 2018年10月14日 (日) 12:12 (UTC)[返信]

As you may have seen, the correct transliteration of the surname has appeared at Wikipedia:執筆・翻訳者の広場: チェルチニャーニ. Here are the two footnotes: 1 (1a) (http://users.unimi.it/austheod/Cercignani.pdf Studi umanistici, Università degli Studi di Milano - Curricula docenti (Faculty CV): Fausto Cercignani.) 3 (1b) (https://riviste.unimi.it/index.php/StudiaAustriaca) および (https://riviste.unimi.it/index.php/StudiaTheodisca). Many thanks! --AJO-200a（会話） 2018年10月14日 (日) 14:04 (UTC)[返信]

I have posted the article to ファウスト・チェルチニャーニ. I didn't cite the new CV you found because I can't understand Italian. And I consider the other two links as, while useful, still primary sources. So I've retained {{一次資料}} template. Anyway, I believe the deletion policy is not applied to the article as it is now. Thank you for your contribution to Japanese Wikipedia. --Deer hunter（会話） 2018年10月19日 (金) 12:39 (UTC)[返信]

Thank you very much indeed for your help! If I find better secondary sources for the two footnotes, I will update the article and let you know. --AJO-200a（会話） 2018年10月20日 (土) 06:08 (UTC)[返信]